Sinking Body Systems Fail

Hey guys,
I recently got a prose poem accepted to and published at the online magazine Kaleidoscopic Resonance and I thought I'd share it with you.

Here's the link:
http://www.kaleidoscopicresonance.com/sinkingbody.html

Any feedback is extremely appreciated!

ps. check out the rest of the issue at www.kaleidoscopicresonance.com